
I love the work of this artist, stories galore in his work. So I thought maybe this one might fit the bill!
my response to Mag77
Thanks for the great prompt Willow.
So I turned around and walked away for ever,
Never thinking how the days were going to drag.
Put away the things that we had done together,
For I'd heard that saved up memories can go bad.
And half my heart said, never let him come again,
And part of me said , let him please come soon.
As I sank into the chair where once he held me,
And the whole place whispered, this is Alan's room.
Very gently in it's box I placed my lovely ring,
I would never wear it on my hand again.
God alone knows why it's over now this precious thing,
I may know some day but I must wait 'til then.
And half my heart said, never let him come again,
And part of me said, let him please come soon.
As I sank into the chair where once he held me,
And the whole place whispered, this is Alan's room.
[The happy ending? yes ...he came back!]
i am glad for the happy ending...hear a bit og john mayers, half of my heart, in this...but it captures well the feel when things are ovre...or at least we think they are...
ReplyDeleteoh, i love a happy ending!! and hopper!
ReplyDeleteLove it! Wonderfully written and a happy ending bonus. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteGreat line...And the whole place whispered, this is Alan's room. There's a hint of eeriness in it and in the rhthm of the poem:)
ReplyDeleteor 'rhythm'!
ReplyDeletebrian...thankyou for your comment..well you could be right albeit it was not consciously done ..but he was my era!
ReplyDeletethankyou words....the flat where we lived was actually a bit eerie..well spotted!
erin...what we want in life are happy endings..me too...just don't always happen that way...this time lucky or blessed!it was a close run at times...but isn't that life anyway!
I am so pleased that there was a happy ending Gerry - I became more and more sad as I read this!
ReplyDeleteYou saw it as a breakup -- as did I.
ReplyDeleteSo well written. I almost got weepy, until the end. I like happy endings. : )
ReplyDeleteYou old softy. Love the Hopper!
ReplyDeleteWell as the man said...all's well that end's well
ReplyDeleteand yes I'm sussed...a softy at heart. Thankyou all you lovely blogland people.
I like the poem even without the happy ending - but it sure made me smile to hear it :)
ReplyDeletebug! How fantastic! you are well enough to comment! Thankyou get even better!
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem - and I'm very pleased that he came back!
ReplyDeleteYay for the Happy ending...I could feel her anguish...nicely done:)
ReplyDeleteYou have to love those happy endings ... an enjoyable Magpie!
ReplyDeleteI love the surprise happy ending.
ReplyDelete"So I turned around and walked away for ever,
ReplyDeleteNever thinking how the days were going to drag."
Wasn't sure how this would end, with the beginning...but glad it was a happy ending. Excellent effort and beautifully written!
Life doesn't always have happy endings but I'm glad your Mag did - a lovely read,
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